In this blog you need to tell us -your classmates and me- what you did your last -or any other- holiday. Bear in mind that the use of the simple past form is important and crucial in order to pass this work.
My last summer holiday.
Last summer I went to Córdoba for two weeks. I spent most of my time visiting some friends and going to museums. I stayed in Alta Gracia, a town that I really love. I enjoyed staying there because of the weather and the people.
One day I decided to go to Carlos Paz. I travelled towards there and stayed there for two days and a night. I stayed in a hotel, I went to its lake and at that night I went to a disco.
Later I decided to go to Sierras de Calamuchita, and I did so. I swam in its streams and had a wonderful time there.
After reading the example above, write your own text or paragraph about what you did your last holiday.
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ResponderEliminarAlumno:Samaniego Enzo
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Last summer I went many times to enjoy the beach with my friends and then I played many chess tournaments in which I did very well I think.
And then I stayed home every day studying chess
Pay attention: instead of many chess... a lot of chess...
ResponderEliminarAlso you can, and need to make your holiday story bigger...
did you go to the disco? which beach did you visist? did you win any tournament? did you swim in the sea? how did you travel to the beach?
listo profe ahi lo corrigo
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ResponderEliminarAlumno:Gustavo Williams
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Trabajo:
I went to last summer's birthday Epuyen 15, my cousin also went to Caleta Olivia's pass 10 with my friends went to the beach and we were fucking late we get tired of fucking in the house of my neighbor went to see performances of bands rock after I went to play soccer with my friends too I spend eating ice cream.
February 18 was my birthday a barbecue on the beach Hise and invite all my friends in the neighborhood re cornered estubo.
My last year
ResponderEliminarLast year trip to Cordoba to visit my brothers Gabriel and Alexander. Gabriel was living in an apartment in Cordoba, and Alexander had to go to Buenos Aires that he was moving when we finished up the boxes to the department had a few mates and we went to Carlos Paz at Cordoba to visit my cousins, James, Vilma and Albert, avian echo a pool and were in the water for a while then went to drink mate and yu furniture shopping center 32-inch plasma TV re piola also bought a ps3 with 3 or 4 games I was with my cousin almost all the afternoon.
Then the next day we went to get the furniture to take back to Alexander in buenos aires to his apartment, after climbing the furniture was tremendous q quilombo take it up the stairs mate and went to visit my father's mother was a little ill
Then we went to Gabriel's apartment to hang out drinking mate and playing catch.
Last summer I went with my cousins sweet 15, my cousin Also Went to Caleta Olivia's pass 10 with my friends Went to the beach and We Were fucking late we get tired of fucking in the house of my neighbor Went to see performances of bands rock after-i went to play soccer with my friends too I spend eating ice cream.
ResponderEliminarFebruary 18 was my birthday a barbecue on the beach Hise and invite all my friends in the neighborhood re estubo cornered.
Gustavo, you need to start your work with "last summer I went to my cousin's sweet 15..."
ResponderEliminarLast summer I went with my cousins sweet 15 years, also went for a walk to Caleta Olivia pass 10 with my friends went to the beach and we were late we got tired of fucking shit in my neighbor's house I went to see the performances of rock bands after I went to play soccer with my friends also happened to me eating ice cream.
ResponderEliminarFebruary 18 was my birthday a barbecue on the beach and Hise invite all my friends in the neighborhood re estubo cornered.
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ResponderEliminarEN CASTELLANO:
ResponderEliminarEl verano pasado fui con mis primos dulce de 15 años, también fui de viaje a Caleta Olivia estubo re piola, con mis amigos fuimos a la playa y llegamos tarde nos pasabamos jodiendo en la casa de mi vecino me fui a ver los espectáculos de bandas de rock después de ir a jugar al fútbol con mis amigos también me pase tomando helados con mis amigos.
El 18 de febrero fue mi cumpleaños hise un asado en la playa y invite a todos mis amigos del barrio estubo re copado.
EN INGLES:
Last summer I went with my cousins Sweet 15, also went on a trip to Caleta Olivia estubo re lanyard, my friends went to the beach and we spent screwing arrived late at the house of my neighbor went to see the shows of bands rock after going to play football with my friends also happen to me eating ice cream with my friends.
On February 18 was my birthday Hise a roast on the beach and invite all my friends in the neighborhood re estubo cornered.
Last year trip to Cordoba to visit my brothers Gabriel and Alejandro. Gabriel was living in an apartment in Cordoba, and Alexander had to go to Buenos Aires that was moving. When we finished up the boxes to the department had a few mates and we went to Carlos Paz, Cordoba, to visit my cousins. Santiago, Wilma and Albert, had installed a pool and we were in the water; after drinking mate went downtown to buy furniture and a 32-inch plasma TV very nice. Also bought a game console with 3 or 4 games and I was with my cousin all afternoon playing.
ResponderEliminarThe next day we went to get the furniture to take back to Alexander from Buenos Aires to his apartment after climbing the furniture that cost a lot of effort to upload the stairs, we kill and we went to visit my father's mother was a little ill.
Then we went to Gabriel's apartment to hang out drinking mate and playing cards.
Unfortunately I lost the cards, then we played a game console to play need for speed, you win all the races.
EDUARDO, there are some mistakes in your writing, I sent you an e mail with some advises...
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ResponderEliminarLEONEL: there are some mistakes in your writing. I sent you an e mail with some advises...
ResponderEliminarTEACHER MIRE COMO LO HICE AHORA
ResponderEliminarEN CASTELLANO:El verano pasado fui con mis primos Sweet 15, también fui de viaje a caleta olivia aver a mi parientes estubo muy bueno fui al shoping con mi familia me quede una semana en caleta olivia en la casas de mis tios fuimos a la playa con mis primos y andubimos dando vueltas por el centro de la ciudad despues volvi a rawson y me la pase llendo a playa con mis amigos.
El 18 de febrero fue mi cumpleaños hise un asado en la casa de mis abuelos en playa y invites a todos mis amigos del barrio.
EN INGLES:Last summer I went with my cousins Sweet 15, also went on a trip to Caleta Olivia estubo aver my relatives went to very good shoping with my family I stayed a week at Caleta Olivia in the houses of my uncles went to the beach with my cousins and Went walking around the city center and then back to rawson pass me by going to the beach with my friends.
On February 18 was my birthday Hise a roast in my grandparents' house on the beach and invite all my friends in the neighborhood.
Digame si esta bien o falta algo :)
hola
ResponderEliminarSOY MICAELA TORRES, ESTOY USANDO ESTE CORREO PORQUE NO PUDE ENTRAR AL MIO TEACHER.
ResponderEliminarLast summer I went to the birthday Epuyen fifteen of my cousin, Was very good compliment. After that, the lake of knowledge "Epuyen" which is beautiful. Went by "pockets" where many tourists and also had estubo by "Bariloche".
I went to "cordoba" and knew the levees there, estubo by "Carlos Paz," which is a beautiful place. Knowledge "Mar del plata”" which I did not like the beach way too, but if I like that place at night because you have many things to do, is way too flat at night is very good thing because you know many people, I am a very sociable so I made many friends and that was the best.
and last known "Las grutas" which I thought was cute, I Went by boat and go bathe much re cute with my brothers and cousins, later in the evening we went to visit the place and we went Depue, Was very good.
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ResponderEliminarNahuel Huenchuquir. 3° A
ResponderEliminarEn castellano:
El verano pasado fui de viaje con mi papá y hermanos, la muy bien durante diez días. Después viaje junto a mi mama y hermanos a Trevelin, porque se casaba mi tío Alfredo, allí me encontré con muchos amigos y familiares, fue hermoso más cuando jugamos en el rió.
luego tuve la suerte de ir a la ciudad de la plata, a probarme al club Estudiantes de la Plata, donde tuve una experiencia inolvidable.
En ingles:
Las summer I went trip to Chile with my father and brothers, very well pass for ten days.
then travel my mather and brothers to Trevelin becaus married my uncle Alfredo, there I met many friends and family, It was more when beatiful playing in the river.
Then I was fortunate to go to city of The Plata, to prove to me the Student Club Of The Plata, where I had an unforgettable experience.
Gustavo: ¿qué es sweet 15? Remember I told you that “cumpleaños de 15” in English was “sweet 15”. Caleta Olivia it is a name so it must be in capital letters. ShoPPing not shoping.
ResponderEliminarIn “also went” there is the subject missing ( falta el sujeto en also went)
Hay partes que en la parte de inglés están en castellano, corríjalas. Between “relatives went” there is again the subject missing. The same happens in “and Went”; “uncles went”. Rawson is a name it must be in capital letters. “y me la pasé yendo a playa con mis amigos” I used to go with my friends to the beach.
BEAR IN MIND:
Uncle: tío
Aunt: tía
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ResponderEliminarMICAELA:
ResponderEliminarChange :birthday Epuyen fifteen of my cousin to my cousin’s sweet fifteen.
Between “cousin, Was” there is a subject missing.
What do you mean by “the lake of knowledge”?
Between “beautiful. Went” there is another subject missing.
What do you mean by “went by pockets”?
Knowledge is not the word that you need to use, try with the past of “know”.
Knowledge Mar del Plata which I did not like the beach way too, but if I like that… check it and change it.
What do you mean by “is way too…”
Instead of and last known Finally I knew…
In “Las grutas" which I thought was cute” there is a subject missing.
Check this sentence and try to arrange it I Went by boat and go bathe much re cute with my brothers and cousins, later in the evening we went to visit the place and we went Depue, Was very good.
Remember that all names must be in capital letters and try to avoid the use of Spanish.
During the class you were doing it quite well. Trust in your knowledge and stop translating from the Internet.
Durning my last holiday i went to “EPUYEN” to see my relatives. I went to the lake,i swam a lot,i was with my cousin’s,i also had my cousin’s brithday . then i went to “cordoba” i know lakes, was very good also known many new places. also walked “pirámides” sleeping in a tent. For the first time I walked by boat and made the sighting thing that really scared me. had gathered many snails and met many people.
ResponderEliminarEnzo samaniego 3 "A"
ResponderEliminartrabajo en castellano:
El verano pasado fui a la playa.
Disfrute y me metí en el mar, yo también jugaba al fútbol con mis amigos en la cancha cerca de la playa.
Fui a jugar muchos torneos de ajedrez y me fue muy bien para mi edad.
Todos los miércoles y los sábados me quedaba en el club con los otros jugadores para jugar partidas rápidas.
Luego me fui a jugar un torneo de ajedrez en la ciudad de Trelew en el que gano $ 400 y me compre mucha ropa y algunos artículos de mi pc.
Eso es todo lo que hice el verano pasado.-
EN INGLES:
Last summer I went to the beach.
Enjoyment and I got into the sea,I also played soccer with my friends on the court near the beach.
I went to play many chess tournaments and I was very well for my age.
Every Wednesday and Saturday I hung out at the club with the other players to play games fast.
Then I went to play a chess tournament in the city of Trelew in which I win $ 400 and I buy many clothes and some items for my pc.
That's all I did last summer.
EN CASTELLANO:El verano pasado fui al cumpleaño de 15 de mi prima,también fui de viaje a caleta olivia aver a mi parientes estubo muy bueno fui al shoping con mi familia me quede una semana en caleta olivia en la casas de mis tios fuimos a la playa con mis primos y andubimos dando vueltas por el centro de la ciudad despues volvi a rawson y me la pase llendo a playa con mis amigos.
ResponderEliminarEl 18 de febrero fue mi cumpleaños hise un asado en la casa de mis abuelos en playa y invites a todos mis amigos del barrio.
EN INGLES:Last summer I went to the 15th birthday of my cousin, also went on a trip to Caleta Olivia estubo aver my relatives went to very good shoping with my family I stayed a week at Caleta Olivia in the houses of my uncles went to the beach Went my cousins and running around the city center and then back to rawson pass me by going to the beach with my friends.
On February 18 was my birthday Hise a roast in my grandparents' house on the beach and invite all my friends in the neighborhood.
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ResponderEliminarALUMNO: BRAIAN LEONEL ROLON PEREZ
ResponderEliminarCURSO: 3° "D"
TRABJO: INGLES
PROF: BRUNO GONZALEZ
Last summer I was at the beach, at Aunt Laura, shared barbecues, trips to the coast to enjoy a beautiful sun.
With my cousins and friends to enjoy rich ice cream, and walked in Cartin, we play soccer on the beach and the evening enjoy a good musical show.
With my friends decided to camp on the beach union and fishing rods and fishing Amaneser was so much fun that I can not forget the times we spent with my cousins and friends.
teacher ya lo hice!!!
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ResponderEliminarAt the last summer , at the new year I went to “LAS GRUTAS” with the whole family .
ResponderEliminarI went to show of my favorite singer , it was so magic
There I new many people , and made many frends
In “LAS GRUTAS” we meet fifteen days of pure heat and beach eith the famile . After those days, we went to “BAROLOCHE” , where visit many beautiful places , for example the “AZUL” river and “LAGO PUELO”
In “RAWSON” I enjoy the beach the rest of the summer
I live a very happy holidays and I hope that this will be so beautiful
Mi último año
ResponderEliminarEl año pasado yo viaje con mi madre y mi padre a Córdoba a visitar a mi hermano Gabriel. Luego de unos días de estar con Gabriel. También visitamos a mi primo Santiago. En su casa instalaron una piscina y estuvimos nadando todos los días que nos quedamos.
Días después, viajamos a Buenos Aires para ayudar a mi hermano Alejandro que decidió volver a mi casa. Pusimos todo el equipaje en el auto, y viajamos a Rawson con mi papá. Mi mamá y mi hermano Alejandro viajaron en avión a Chubut.
El viaje fue largo, pero entretenido porque lo hicimos por otra ruta que en otros viajes anteriores no habíamos recorrido.
Pasamos por varias ciudades y nos detuvimos a descansar en la capital de La Pampa, Santa Rosa. Es una linda ciudad y es muy grande.
Llegamos a Rawson cansados por el viaje y tuvimos que descargar todas las cosas de mi hermano. Mi mamá y mi hermano Alejandro llegaron cuatro días después, porque Alejandro tenía que trabajar unos días más. Además, no cabíamos todos en el auto, con la cantidad de cosas de Alejandro que traíamos a casa.
Translate:
My last year
The past year I traveled with my mother and father to Cordoba to visit my brother Gabriel. After a few days to be with Gabriel. We also visited my cousin James. At home installed a pool and swam every day we stayed.
Days later, traveled to Buenos Aires to help my brother Alexander decided to return to my home. We put all the luggage in the car, and traveled to Rawson with my dad. My mom and brother Alexander flew to Chubut.
The trip was long but fun because we did a different route than other previous trips had not traveled.
We went through several cities and we stopped to rest in the capital of La Pampa, Santa Rosa. It's a beautiful city and is very large.
We Rawson tired from the trip and had to download all the things my brother. My mom and brother Alexander came four days later, because Alexander had to work a few days.
Also, do not all fit in the car, with the amount of stuff we brought Alexander home.
ALUMNO: GUSTAVO DANIEL WILLIAMS
ResponderEliminarCURSO: 3° "D"
TRABJO: INGLES
PROF: BRUNO GONZALEZ
El verano pasado fui al cumpleaño de 15 de mi prima,también fui de viaje a caleta olivia aver a mi parientes estubo muy bueno fui al shoping con mi familia me quede una semana en caleta olivia en la casas de mis tios fuimos a la playa con mis primos y andubimos dando vueltas por el centro de la ciudad despues volvi a rawson y me la pase llendo a playa con mis amigos.
El 18 de febrero fue mi cumpleaños hise un asado en la casa de mis abuelos en playa y invites a todos mis amigos del barrio.
Translate:
Last summer I went to the 15th birthday of my cousin, also went on a trip to Caleta Olivia estubo aver my relatives went to very good shoping with my family I stayed a week at Caleta Olivia in the houses of my uncles went to the beach Went my cousins and running around the city center and then back to rawson pass me by going to the beach with my friends.
On February 18 was my birthday Hise a roast in my grandparents' house on the beach and invite all my friends in the neighborhood.
My last year
ResponderEliminarThe past year I traveled with my mother and father to Cordoba to visit my brother Gabriel. After a few days of being with Gabriel. We visited my cousin James. At his home vilma and alberto installed a pool and swam every day we stayed there.
Days later, my father traveled to Buenos Aires to help my brother Alexander, Alexander decided to return to my home. We put all the luggage in the car, and my father and Alexander and I traveled to Rawson with my dad. My mom and brother Alexander flew to Chubut.
The trip was long but fun because we did a different route than other previous trips my father and Alexander and I had not travelled.
We went through several cities and we stopped to rest in the capital of La Pampa, Santa Rosa. It's a beautiful city and is very large.
We and Rawson tired from the trip and had to download all my brother’s stuff. My mom and brother Alexander came four days later, because Alexander had to work a few days.
Also, my father, Alexander and I did not fit all in the car, with the amount of stuff we brought from Alexander’s home.
Durning my last holiday I went to “Epuyen” to see my relatives. I went to the lake,I swam a lot,I was with my cousin’s,I also had my cousin’s brithday . Then I went to “Cordoba” I went to visit the lakes, The place was A very good place I also knew many new places.I also walked in “Pirámides” I slept in a tent. For the first I travelled by boat and made the whales watching that really scared me. I gathered many snails and met many people.
ResponderEliminarLast summer I went to my cousin's sweet 15,I,my dad,my mom and my brother also went on a trip to Caleta Olivia to see my grandfather and my grandmother and my uncle and aunt.I,my dad,my mom and my brother went to a very good shopping with my family,I stayed a week at Caleta Olivia in the house of my uncle and aunt.I,my brother,my uncle and aunt went to the beach. I and my brother Went with our cousins to run around the city center and then i,my dad,my mom and my brother went back to Rawson to spend the rest of the holidays going to the beach with my friends.
ResponderEliminarOn February 18th was my birthday I made a roast in my grandparents' house on the beach and I invited all my friends from the neighborhood.
At the last summer, at the new year I went to “LAS GRUTAS” with the whole family.
ResponderEliminarI went to show of my favorite singer, it was so magic.
There I new many people, and made many friends.
In “LAS GRUTAS” we meet fifteen days of pure heat and beach. After those days, we went to “BAROLOCHE” , where visited many beautiful places , for example the “AZUL” river and “LAGO PUELO”
In “RAWSON” I enjoyed the beach the rest of the summer
I lived a very happy holidays.
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I was a doctor
-I study english
I studied english
-I am a cientific
I was a cientific
-I am blonde
I was blonde
-I am big
I was big
Last summer I went to the beach.
ResponderEliminarI enjoyed swimming,I also played soccer with my friends on the court near beach.
I went to play many chess tournaments and I was very well for my age.
Every wednesday and saturday I went out a the club with the other players to play fast games.
Then I went to play a chess tournament in the city of trelew in which I won $400 and bought many that's all I did last summer
Last summer I went trip to Chile with my father and brothers, I had a good time during ten days. Then I Subject missing my mother and brothers traveled to Trevelin vacation my uncle Alfredo got marryed. There I met many friends and family, I went to try myself in river club.
ResponderEliminarThen Was lucky to go to La Plata, to prove on the student club Of the La Plata, where I had an unforgettable experience. soy nahuel huenchuquir
my vacation: I went to Mar del Plata after the weekend, we traveled to the province of Córdoba there long and had a beautiful month, we enjoyed. went to the city of the skirt, cordoba capital, Villa Carlos Paz and high grace , high grace there we went to see abel pintos, axel nocheros.todas Ricardo Montaner and went for a walk at night, with my uncles and my cousin, who was they who invited me to spend my vacation at the theater allí.fuimos cinema.were re nice holiday
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EliminarIn my vacation of 2010 i went on a trip to the cordillera, i met relatives of my cousins, i toured places that did not know and the truth that I liked them a lot. I was on the feast of the steam train watching performances by famous singers, as is the Chaqueño Palavecino and Jean Carlos; Also i went to rodeos in involving my cousins to the that he was within everything well.
ResponderEliminarEnjoy the return of union beach as all the years, going out with friends and family to have fun playing football, volleyball and other games. Kevin Navarrete 5º 1ª
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